Loranys Gellantara

Thanks I'll keep that in mind next time. I have posted only one other piece on here. All my other work is on fictionpress. I am not new but thanks.

This is a beautiful poem but I found that I didn't quite understand it. I don't know maybe it's just me. I can't think of anything else to add. Keep ...

I found that some stanzas made no purpose as well. I agree with write me you should take some of the stanzas out. Other than that I think it's a ...

I see what you mean. Let's try again... I've fallen into a dark hole, There's no light even during day, It's too hard to breathe any more, All I can ...

I like this poem but I agree that it is a bit childish. I don't really get what it means though. Is it like someone getting addicted to a book ...

I don't really get what this poem is about. Is it meant to be a safe house or something? I think you need to be a bit more discriptive with ...